KSB Group, comment on this Connor Kellow, Tom Stout

K.S.B Group Work    Storyline Ideas

Main Concepts

Copyright

Plagiarism

Main characters

Tim

Terrance

Police Officer Tony

Tim’s Dad and Mother

Terrance’s Dad and Mother

Workers on Terrance’s lemonade stand

Props and character design

What the characters wear should be conventional of their stereotype

Rich – Shirt and tie comb over

Poor – boring dull colours, farmer cap

Props include portable tv, big tv, poorly designed stall for Tim, well designed stall for Terrance.

Main Narrative

Equilibrium

Poor Kid Tim, sat there watching his family argue over the fact that they do not have enough money, trying to fix his tv. Rich kid Terrance family are arguing over what to buy next whether it’s a swimming pool and hot tub and the rich kid watching tv.

Juxtaposition of the two families.

Disruption

Tim decides to make his own source of income. He realises that a business would be a great start. Tim stares at a lemon for about 4 and a half days (Papua New Guinea Future Sound of London 0.48 to1.41)(timelapse of a clock)

Tim has an amazing idea. He was to form a lemonade stand, in the field just over from his house. He starts building his stand out of scrap wood. Terrance watches this all from the house. Terrance is greedy and wants a stand as well so he uses his parents money to help him. He makes it opposite Tim.

Quest

The main idea is that the rich and poor juxtaposition, so Tim’s stand is a wooden stand made out of old wood and cardboard. Terrance is a really good quality stand (prop needs to be thought out).